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英语翻译书中讲诉了俩个小偷进入Sun Store商店偷珠宝,一个穿着黑色大衣的人出现了,把他们俩锁在一间屋里.半小时后警

2018-10-23

题目:

英语翻译
书中讲诉了俩个小偷进入Sun Store商店偷珠宝,一个穿着黑色大衣的人出现了,把他们俩锁在一间屋里.半小时后警察赶了过来,带走了小偷.那个穿着黑色大衣的人,警察们认为他就是Mr Brave.虽然Mr Brave帮助过警方很多次,他很出名,但是没有人知道他到底是谁,长什么样子?

解答:

The book tells about a story that two thieves slipped into Sun Store for jewelry when a man in a black coat turned up and locked them into a room.Half an hour later the police came and arrested the thieves.The policemen took that man in black as Mr.Brave.Although Mr.Brave was famous for having helped the cops for many times,nobody yet knows who he actually is and how he looks like.
进入这个词可以用slipped into,比entered更具体,更地道;另外thieves就是小偷的意思,后面最好不要再出现steal之类的词,因为英文中不喜欢重复,直接用for jewelry就可以;同理,turned up 也比appeared要好,而且turned up比较活泼更适用于记叙文;take sb.as 也比think好;"虽然Mr Brave帮助过警方很多次,他很出名." 最好连接成一个从句,因为他有名和帮助警方有逻辑关系,在英文中最好联系起来,另外and was famous放在后面有点头重脚轻,不符合英美人的习惯;


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